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Wednesday, December 06, 2006

A poem

I'm Building a RocketI'm building a rocket.
As soon as I'm done
I'm taking my friends
on a trip to the sun.
But what to you mean
that the sun is too hot?
Oh well, I suppose
I'll just pick a new spot.
I'm building a rocket.
I'm finishing soon
and taking my friends
on a trip to the moon!
But what do you mean
that the moon has no air?
Well dang, then I guess
that we can't go up there.
I'm building a rocket.
It's going to fly.
I'm taking my friends
way up high in the sky.
But what do you mean
when you ask how we'll land?
This rocket is harder
to build than I planned.
To heck with the rocket.
It's out in the shed.
I'm taking my friends
out for pizza instead.
I hope you like it.

6 Comments:

  • At 10:59 AM, Blogger jetsogem said…

    Hello William

    I like your poem it is interesting and it is very long.


    From Gemma

     
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  • At 11:02 AM, Blogger jetsogem said…

    Hello william

    I think your blog is great


    From gemma

     
  • At 2:07 AM, Blogger bird babe! said…

    Yo Will I like that poem i think I'd prefere pizza instead of the moon or the sun!!!anyway seeya soon Birdbabe xxxx

     
  • At 2:10 AM, Blogger bird babe! said…

    Hi Will Same with me I LOVE YOUR POEM it is so great It's like a proffesinol had done it I think you have done well and it must of taken a long time to do it and also thinking about it well done william. Catbabemeg or meg

     

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